Wednesday, December 19, 2007
Desire, is a huge word.. wide.. secretly announced.. people.. animals.. plants.. objects.. aaah thoughts are fighting in my mind, it is an idea searching for its path clashing into another resulting in a freak weird foggy thought that has the magic to relieve you and balance back your mind, but only if you catch it. Its deep down there.. deeper than you imagine.. Back to DESIRE, is it true that every desire comes from the need of something? I dont know.
The desire of food, of love, of course i can not count them all but.. lets talk about the desire of SEX.
Is there a need of sex! I believe so, but why do some wives/husbands cheat on their husbands/wives! Is it the same why we eat food when we are not hungry! aaaaaah many questions in my mind many answers as well but, hmmmm its really a sensetive topic to write about specially knowing some people in real that might be reading my words right now.
Cheating, which party is really in pain! Is it the cheater or the one being cheated on! Does Lust tastes bitter in cheating! Is there any excuse would justify cheating! Would people forgive it! And for how many times!
"She prayed and asked God for helping her not to fall in sin, went out and called him:
he: am too horny cant wait to hold u and feel u melt in my hand
she: am scared i dont feel well at all
he: dont worry the minute you're here you're gonna forget
she: feeling the guilt already
he: you're gonna forget it i promise
picked her up went to that place, hell she felt it..
she's thinking: what on earth am i doin here
she: so i still don feel well and to be honest.. i feel worse
he: relax babe.. holding her shoulders
she: please take them away don touch me
she felt fire where he held her, he tried to put his arms around her.. she jumped and rushed to the door, two desires one wishing him to take her to the bed room, another to go back home and feel safe and being that decent WIFE.. suddenly he opened the door .. stepped out and asked her to leave
she: wait are you mad at me!
he: just lets go
she: please wait
he interrupted: it doesnt matter just lets leave
she: are you mad at me! please dont be i just cant
he: lets leave it doesnt look good we standing at the door just lets go (sharply firmly)
he dropped her back, all the way in the car she was smiling .. thanking God for being there for her.. and answering her prayers.. knowing that if instead of him going out not to the bed room, she wouldnt resist.. THANKS GOD".
posted by Loura at 10:19 PM |
At 3:07 AM, SAudiGuy
you are always unique :)
love the story
mashalah 3alik :)
got the skill for a writer :)
hope to see a book some day :)
At 3:10 AM, Loura
Thanks my posts correcter :* wished to see u commenting about the plot though.
At 3:16 AM, SAudiGuy
first, it is corrector :P
i like the way the story went.
told you, got some skills :)
the thoughts at the begining, was well organized, and the story came after preparing the reader :)
well done dear :)
At 3:52 AM,
Umm, no comments ,
bs el kbeer 6oul 3umra kbeer ya loura , madrey shno agolech bas nice story ya katkota ,;p
emwafegga enshalla , o ellah elammam ya 7elwa ,
At 3:55 AM, Loura
el3ain ma te3la 3al7ajib 6al 3umrik o thanx alot for reading and commenting.
At 3:57 AM,
I Read the Story .. It is nice you have talent and everything but it is too short it has to be longer if you call it an article and you have to work on the introduction a little bit, look at the subject from more angles then view your story. Your story was also short but it was so accurate which really impressed me :) work on the length of what you write always ;) All the best.
At 4:01 AM, Loura
Thanx for reading and commenting. I totally agree with you.. i just wanted to finish what i started coz u know its just a few moments that i feel like writing and unfortunately i lost it with so many interruptions.. was hard for me to collect it back again and write.. maybe shouldnt finish it tonight. its done already and thanx alot.
At 4:11 AM,
Never write without inspiration. People who got talent and i think you do never write unless they are inspired. It's like a gift you cannot control it. So whenever you get any interruptions stop writing and you will be inspired again. Never underestimate your writings. Always cherish them and never publish them unless you gave them all your time and talent ;)
Keep my words in your mind, You will thank me later.
At 4:18 AM, Loura
youre right.. ill keep editing.. and am thanking u now :)
you know.. i didnt wanna go into more details in that story traditions still tying me up. i know what ur gonna say .. but i still cant.
At 4:28 AM,
You never know what I'm going to say. But i tell you what, Sticking to the traditions is a decent behaviour, Yet writings always show things that are hidden so traditions should never interfere with your writings because they are supposed to discuss sensitive issues. Nevertheless shyness might interfere and i think this is your case.
And you're quite welcome ;)
At 4:35 AM,
Traditions tie you up and shyness doesn't ? Ummm.. You seem to be a mysterious lady to know then. Which is rare nowadays.
At 4:38 AM, Loura
u can call me India (the land of contadictions as well) gn dear
At 12:07 AM, Loura
hey dear.. missing ur comments :P
well, what about this post! ;P
At 1:34 PM,
Well...Am sure u would have an opposite ending to ur story if it was about u & me... ;>
At 5:12 PM, Loura
Welcome again, Thanks God it wasn't me and you looool. Its just an imaginary story to support the post.
At 2:05 PM,
My dearest loura , I really enjoyed your story .I respect your honesty about your feeling and the contradiction between principle and desire that makes us lost in our mind.Tapoo is what we suffer the most but we might enjoy sin in somehow.
At 12:18 AM, Loura
Exactly, i think its the forbidden fruit. We always tend to go for whats forbidden. thanx for ur comment.